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Beautiful Disillusion

Candle bright affection is melting Trust is on the wane, our love light is flickering Vows of fidelity was such a beautiful beginning Heartfelt words spoken with sincerity had no echo fear of ending This love burned so bright, but only for a short time Until waxen tears of disillusion started doubt dripping Beautiful plans, glowing promises dissipated so fast Passionate hope with a cold lip stroke turned into ash Fiery vows of fidelity was such a beautiful beginning Lovely scented words waxed with sincerity, they had no wick fear of ending Now, beautiful disillusion has waning hope tearfully melting Flickering doubts, trust is sorrowfully wavering Paraffin emotions ... scarlet strain of a twined, tallow heart is burning at both ends with pain — A sad start of living apart

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Date: 5/27/2019 1:47:00 PM
Wonderful extended metaphor of the candle, symbolizing the meltdown of marriage's first promise. Lovely done, Freddie! :) gw
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Date: 5/22/2019 1:34:00 AM
You have a masterful pen that paints pain in beauty! A "tallow heart" that melts while spilling its wonders! A great pleasure to read.. my deepest regards, Freddie.. God bless you.
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Date: 5/21/2019 6:52:00 PM
ohh, break-ups are truly devastating, freddie...this stirring piece pierces the heart!... huggs
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