Beautiful Death

With each touch... I lose 
the sense of feel
She reels me in with her 
luscious appeal
O... I have fallen for her & 
she knows
Heart... mind... body... & 
most of all soul
Ecstasy!... Bliss!... 
Euphoria!
& she won the war... 
Gloria!
Without having swung an 
axe or strung a bow
My body lay helpless 
begging for more...
...More time to make 
amends & say goodbye
But she won't listen she's 
far too high
Her name isn't common 
like mary or beth
But love her & she will 
take away your breath
I guess love is a 
euphemism for a 
beautiful death
As the hands of time 
undoubtedly lead to 
death...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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August 17, 2013 at 10:58 PM
BERTRAND CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
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August 17, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Hi Bertrand, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *
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August 13, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Congrats on your featured poem I enjoyed your poetry ! Laura :0 )
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August 1, 2013 at 10:40 PM
Hello Bertrand, hope to see another new poem by you soon....SKAT
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August 1, 2013 at 4:03 AM
- Hello new member: Bertrand. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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July 31, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Thank you for the soup mail. I will come back in hopes you post another poem..... SKAT from Texas
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July 31, 2013 at 8:28 AM
wow! It is Beautiful! Bertrand,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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July 31, 2013 at 6:09 AM
my favorite form. .. Bertrand, speaks and grips the reader. Welcome to the soup....linda
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