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Beautiful Death

With each touch... I lose the sense of feel She reels me in with her luscious appeal O... I have fallen for her & she knows Heart... mind... body... & most of all soul Ecstasy!... Bliss!... Euphoria! & she won the war... Gloria! Without having swung an axe or strung a bow My body lay helpless begging for more... ...More time to make amends & say goodbye But she won't listen she's far too high Her name isn't common like mary or beth But love her & she will take away your breath I guess love is a euphemism for a beautiful death As the hands of time undoubtedly lead to death...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 8/17/2013 10:58:00 PM
BERTRAND CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 8/17/2013 10:06:00 PM
Hi Bertrand, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA *
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Date: 8/13/2013 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem I enjoyed your poetry ! Laura :0 )
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Date: 8/1/2013 10:40:00 PM
Hello Bertrand, hope to see another new poem by you soon....SKAT
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Date: 8/1/2013 4:03:00 AM
- Hello new member: Bertrand. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:54:00 AM
Thank you for the soup mail. I will come back in hopes you post another poem..... SKAT from Texas
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:28:00 AM
wow! It is Beautiful! Bertrand,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/31/2013 6:09:00 AM
my favorite form. .. Bertrand, speaks and grips the reader. Welcome to the soup....linda
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