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Beautiful Dawn, Lately

Cool waves and green foam
Zest in crisp morning breezes
Pink clouds float along
Sunrise splash into gold sun
Chill thrills before day's begun.

Yellow-orange zing
A stroll in warmth since the dip
Blooms on green catwalks
Stained skies are fading to blue
Another mauve rendezvous.

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Christina Bowring

March 19, 2024 at 1:42 PM

Dear Evelyn, this is so enchanting and captivating from the very first word to the last. The imagery is exquisite full of glorious colour and the picture pairs perfectly. Your creativity and artistic use of colour never fails to amaze me. ‘ sunrise splash into gold sun’ ‘ yellow-orange zing’ ‘stained skies are fading to blue’ - glorious. Thank you for transporting me to a heavenly place with your skilled poetic words. Such a calm, tranquil read. So enjoyed it. Hugs my friend xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 19, 2024 at 9:04 PM

Dear Christina, thank you for your very kind words, which bring inspiration and joy. How delighted I am that you enjoyed this work! Blessings and hugs. :)

Paula Goldsmith

March 17, 2024 at 10:54 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/great ending/colorful picture. I can see it clearly. Have a wonderful day..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 17, 2024 at 5:07 PM

It's great news that this poem creates a vivid picture for you. Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 17, 2024 at 3:54 AM

- A beautiful description of the beauty of nature, Evelyn - (love the picture you have chosen) - hugs

Mulu Magdalinos

March 16, 2024 at 10:33 PM

Hello Evelyn, a lovely Tanka,nice imagery. Evelyn Blessings.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 17, 2024 at 5:55 PM

Hello Mulu, thank you very much. Blessings.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 15, 2024 at 4:44 PM

Dear Evelyn, I so love the serene picture of nature's awakening. The imagery of cool waves, pink clouds, and golden sunrises evokes a sense of tranquility and renewal. Your words dance like the morning breeze, bringing warmth and joy. This is a beautiful piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 15, 2024 at 10:06 PM

Thank you for your heartwarming remarks, my friend. It is such joy to to read them. I am happy to hear that my words dance. All good wishes, Evelyn

Ink Empress

March 15, 2024 at 7:56 AM

Another mauve rendezvous worth praising and deserving of all the accolades. Gorgeous art and also beautiful tanka, so picturesque and descriptive. I love the way you always paint imagery and this is no exception. Your use of colors enhances the beauty. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 15, 2024 at 9:58 PM

I offer my heartfelt thanks for the pleasure of your lovely response to this tanka. I'm very happy to know that you enjoy my poems. I appreciate your kind thoughts so much. Blessings.