Beautiful Dawn, Lately

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Cool waves and green foam Zest in crisp morning breezes Pink clouds float along Sunrise splash into gold sun Chill thrills before day's begun. Yellow-orange zing A stroll in warmth since the dip Blooms on green catwalks Stained skies are fading to blue Another mauve rendezvous.

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Christina Bowring

Date: 3/19/2024 1:42:00 PM

Dear Evelyn, this is so enchanting and captivating from the very first word to the last. The imagery is exquisite full of glorious colour and the picture pairs perfectly. Your creativity and artistic use of colour never fails to amaze me. ‘ sunrise splash into gold sun’ ‘ yellow-orange zing’ ‘stained skies are fading to blue’ - glorious. Thank you for transporting me to a heavenly place with your skilled poetic words. Such a calm, tranquil read. So enjoyed it. Hugs my friend xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/19/2024 9:04:00 PM

Dear Christina, thank you for your very kind words, which bring inspiration and joy. How delighted I am that you enjoyed this work! Blessings and hugs. :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/17/2024 10:54:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/great ending/colorful picture. I can see it clearly. Have a wonderful day..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/17/2024 5:07:00 PM

It's great news that this poem creates a vivid picture for you. Thank you for your gracious words of appreciation. Blessings.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2024 3:54:00 AM

- A beautiful description of the beauty of nature, Evelyn - (love the picture you have chosen) - hugs

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 3/16/2024 10:33:00 PM

Hello Evelyn, a lovely Tanka,nice imagery. Evelyn Blessings.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/17/2024 5:55:00 PM

Hello Mulu, thank you very much. Blessings.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/15/2024 4:44:00 PM

Dear Evelyn, I so love the serene picture of nature's awakening. The imagery of cool waves, pink clouds, and golden sunrises evokes a sense of tranquility and renewal. Your words dance like the morning breeze, bringing warmth and joy. This is a beautiful piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/15/2024 10:06:00 PM

Thank you for your heartwarming remarks, my friend. It is such joy to to read them. I am happy to hear that my words dance. All good wishes, Evelyn

Ink Empress

Date: 3/15/2024 7:56:00 AM

Another mauve rendezvous worth praising and deserving of all the accolades. Gorgeous art and also beautiful tanka, so picturesque and descriptive. I love the way you always paint imagery and this is no exception. Your use of colors enhances the beauty. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/15/2024 9:58:00 PM

I offer my heartfelt thanks for the pleasure of your lovely response to this tanka. I'm very happy to know that you enjoy my poems. I appreciate your kind thoughts so much. Blessings.