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Beautiful Dawn

Wet sand between my toes, in pink gold sunrise rays,
The day's unfolding in glory, as if to give Him praise!
The sand is warm and squishy, underneath bare feet,
As I walk to the cottage, awaiting Christmas treats.
A fine start to this vacation, and to this blessed day!
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George Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 12:34 AM
I can sense the day's unfolding glory in the image and in the poem Evelyn !
Laurie Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 5:21 PM
Hello Evelyn ... you certainly have a deep love of nature and the beauty it provides. This certainly comes out in your poetry - well done again Evelyn - Lindsay
Buehler Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 9:28 PM
Thank you for your heartwarming appreciation, Lindsay. Evelyn
Mcconnell Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:20 AM
Lovely penning Evelyn with lovely rhyme and flow too. You make us jealous over here in the UK where it's wet and miserable. Blessings, Gordon
Buehler Avatar
November 16, 2021 at 8:40 AM
Cheer up! Every place has it's bad weather days. Thank you for your kind appreciation. Happy holidays, Evelyn
Buhagiar Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 11:31 PM
May yo have a blessed day next December. Happy Christmas.
Buehler Avatar
November 14, 2021 at 9:31 AM
And you as well. Thank you, Victor.
Horsman Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:20 PM
You write it so well, Evelyn, yes indeed, i'm there with you.
Buehler Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:42 PM
Thank you for joining me for the Christmas sunrise, Harry. Happy holidays.
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