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Beautiful Butterfly

Wrapped in a rainbow of vibrant beauty While butterflies dance to rhythms beat Caught off balance by beauty still Inspired by the smallest features Found where love is it's purest Fluttering on silk wings Waiting patiently for butterfly kisses A promise of perfumed dreams Here while wrapped in ecstasy Intoxicated by butterfly beauty Drinking in naked fantasies Stay beautiful, beautiful butterfly

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Carol Eastman

Date: 2/25/2012 9:05:00 AM

Beautiful imagery...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2012 9:04:00 AM

I surely hope and pray it will be soon Shannon for your words are very precious .. treasures to behold and read..luv.. happy weekend..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/18/2012 3:36:00 PM

Shannon where are u luv.. so missing u and your poetic talent.. hope all is well .. happy weekend..

Date: 6/12/2012 7:10:00 AM

* . . "AHHH, 'MY BELOVED.'" . . *

John Rhinem

Date: 2/3/2012 4:03:00 PM

... * Not even Macbeth made sense anymore as I gazed out the window * Sweat falling from my brow upon her naked asss, with glowing eyes * Framed in crimson applauding through the stained glass... * "CatPeople II" *

Date: 2/3/2012 6:45:00 PM

‡ Owww, This Is Sooo Beautiful Again Dear John ¥ Are You Sure That It Could Not Be For Sweeet Beautiful Shannon Too?? ¥ I Love Love Love This ¥ Wow, Sooo Very Lucky ¥ My Luv, Forever ¥ Rachel ‡

John Rhinem

Date: 2/3/2012 3:48:00 PM

...Lights camera action ---- And I dipped my quill into her heart shaped glass * Red as rum that ran from its tip * But I don't know why Shakespeare cried, she screamed * Whileas kicking her high into the night; toes spread wide * But I, remaining composed as she had requested... * Afore chaining her beauty unto the bed post; full moon madness * In drops of silver hues and tighter, she begged until she collasped * ...Cont}

Date: 2/3/2012 3:52:00 PM

Smile ˜ Tis supposed to be within the fourth line --- "Whileas kicking her 'feet' high into the night; toes spread wide" ... :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/16/2012 11:28:00 PM

Hi...once again... about to log off in 2 hours...lol...i'm on vacation and enjoying the soup... and butterflies are always my last stop...lol... got to dream of beauty you know... love it... staying is believing..love it..love it...always,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 1/17/2012 12:01:00 AM

okay..i'm still here... and i was making sure my comment went through... adding you to my faves... shame on me..it was hard to google your name here on the soup...always...p.d.

Joe Flach

Date: 1/11/2012 4:44:00 PM

The butterfly is such a beautiful inspiration for and topic of poetry. I think, a well-written poem has some of that fluttering characteristic we admire in the butterfly. This is especially true with a free-verse poem written well - as this one is. Thanks for sharing your beauty with us.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/10/2012 7:37:00 PM

I can see the delicacy of a butterfly signifying the beauty of love. Such a wonderful comparison. :)

John Rhinem

Date: 1/8/2012 7:41:00 PM

Smile ˜ This is beautiful, &, You are beautiful ˜ Read between the lines & you'll know just how beautiful I think that, "You Are" ˜ My love to You, John!:) ˜