Beautiful Birds

I do not like to recite poetry
nor have talent at this.
Instead I grab a woman
of flesh
hair
her feel all
to just love her
with her ??lips,
tongue with everything and gave
and God gave me.
Finally who does not want to ****
when has everything.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 9, 2013 at 12:24 AM
Marinescu, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
Victor Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 10:59 PM
Thank you. I hope today will be a good day for you too.
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April 16, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Marinescu Victor, this is a very thought provoking poem. love it! However, I'm stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up here by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
Victor Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 11:57 PM
Thank you very much for the welcome.
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April 16, 2013 at 1:13 PM
Victor, well written. - Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with writing, reading and comments here with us. - Wish you all the best. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Victor Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 11:58 PM
Thank you very much and hope to be a good sign
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