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10th in Your Choice A Contest (Sponsor: Brian Strand)

Judged: March 16th, 2025

Beautiful Bees

buzzing bees breed blooms, 

bearing beauty, banishing 

brutal barrenness

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Sara Kendrick

January 5, 2026 at 4:17 AM

The b's have it. Way to go with this one being featured on homepage. Thank you for sharing your honey of a work. Sara K

Frances Schiavina

February 12, 2025 at 9:50 AM

Uplifting poem contrasting bareness to sounds and colors of spring.

Trina Layne

February 12, 2025 at 5:49 PM

Thank you.

Arlo Parker

December 26, 2024 at 10:57 PM

No bees, no we's. Alliteration blitz, TL. Well crafted. :o))

Trina Layne

December 27, 2024 at 10:53 PM

Appreciated.

Kim Rodrigues

December 26, 2024 at 6:48 AM

Lovely, Trina, with great alliteration!

Trina Layne

December 26, 2024 at 4:35 PM

Thank you. Nature is always a great theme to work with.

Beautiful Bees

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