Beautiful Basin

The mountain bends down,
kissing the nape of her neck:
As jealous trees sway.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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La France Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Raul, beautiful, love this and it is nice to see you posting a contest on PS _Constance
Moreno Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:08 AM
Been a while since I’ve been here. Figured I’d give people something to do. Thanks for stopping by.
Goff Avatar
September 16, 2017 at 9:02 PM
Ok...here we go! expansive thought in 3 lines...no one does it better!
Tor Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 11:21 PM
Raul God bless you your friend from the past.
Moreno Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Torres?
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 10:41 AM
Ahh!! How romantic..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by my page..I wondered if you were okay for I had not heard from you for a long time..Sara
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