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Beautiful Assasin

I gawk across the court A witness to her Murdered Love She points towards the Guilty veins That Blocked a Dead heart He seduces her amid those firing eyes And she flames in bloody fluids Over her blemished cheeks At which his Lip marks Yet as the defence Solicits, and again solicits A wordless girl says “Guilty” As the true guilt’s’ lips fastens her mouth But I attained across And clutched the handcuffs That symbolizes what I restrain The chains to my Life Yet the Beautiful departs the beautiful While I scrutinize this prisoner Flees the Pumping cell, And the Knock, Knock, Knock acts the End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/25/2009 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 8:58:00 AM
Congrats on the feature. While you restrain yours, I seem to be forever struggling with mine (chains). Deep write. Vince
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Date: 6/25/2009 3:23:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured
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Date: 6/23/2009 2:01:00 PM
Great use of imagery. Congratulations on having featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 2:25:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/21/2009 6:32:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a profound way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2009 10:11:00 AM
Ohmigod! I Love This!! Amazing Job Here. You Just Earned Rights To My Favs List ^^ Haha And Its Chill Kisses Back Lol. (Dont Worrii I Never Really Write That Either Like That Lol) P.S. Don' Know Why. Your Comments Make Me Smile ^^ Peace. Jese
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Date: 6/4/2009 10:06:00 AM
Saidah. My God, Saidah..this is a profound poem!!! There is a story here. I loved this poem...Patricia nLangston-Moran
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Date: 5/28/2009 10:39:00 AM
Ooooh - dark and mysterious and vampirish and murderous...cool!
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Date: 5/27/2009 1:37:00 PM
Wonderful atmospherics @.@ so tense, the perfect place to display that, a courtroom; thanks for the experience!!!!=D and for the comments jojojo I googled Oman, I think I heard of it before; what happened?
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Date: 5/27/2009 9:41:00 AM
beautiful! Great you, this piece is awesome! … keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!
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