Beautiful Assasin

I gawk across the court
A witness to her Murdered Love
               She points towards the Guilty veins
That Blocked a Dead heart 

He seduces her amid those firing eyes
And she flames in bloody fluids
Over her blemished cheeks
At which his Lip marks

Yet as the defence
Solicits, and again solicits
A wordless girl says “Guilty”
As the true guilt’s’ lips fastens her mouth

But I attained across
And clutched the handcuffs
That symbolizes what I restrain
The chains to my Life

Yet the Beautiful departs the beautiful
While I scrutinize this prisoner 
Flees the Pumping cell,
And the Knock, Knock, Knock acts the End
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 8:58 AM
Congrats on the feature. While you restrain yours, I seem to be forever struggling with mine (chains). Deep write. Vince
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2009 at 3:23 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured
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June 23, 2009 at 2:01 PM
Great use of imagery. Congratulations on having featured this week. Ernilando
Christian Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 2:25 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
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June 21, 2009 at 6:32 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in a profound way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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June 8, 2009 at 10:11 AM
Ohmigod! I Love This!! Amazing Job Here. You Just Earned Rights To My Favs List ^^ Haha And Its Chill Kisses Back Lol. (Dont Worrii I Never Really Write That Either Like That Lol) P.S. Don' Know Why. Your Comments Make Me Smile ^^ Peace. Jese
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June 4, 2009 at 10:06 AM
Saidah. My God, Saidah..this is a profound poem!!! There is a story here. I loved this poem...Patricia nLangston-Moran
Curcio Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Ooooh - dark and mysterious and vampirish and murderous...cool!
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May 27, 2009 at 1:37 PM
Wonderful atmospherics @.@ so tense, the perfect place to display that, a courtroom; thanks for the experience!!!!=D and for the comments jojojo I googled Oman, I think I heard of it before; what happened?
Adeite Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 9:41 AM
beautiful! Great you, this piece is awesome! … keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!
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