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Beautiful

BEAUTIFUL Beautiful is the day when you wake And your eyes meet mine in love And the shining sun and its warmth Dim dull and cold in the shade Of your golden aura bathing me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/19/2011 8:15:00 AM
wow, a woman that outshines the sun. What excellent metaphor, Sydney!! a question for ya. Soupmail.
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:34:00 PM
beautiful is the day i read this poem beautiful are the verses but about the day and subjects.. cant tell of their beauty beautifully wrought, Sydney!
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:31:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL IS THE DAY WHEN I READ THIS POEM... WHAT COMPLEX POEM... SUN AND WARMTH THEN DIM DULL AND COLD... THE VERSES ARE BEAUTIFUL.. DONT KNOW ABOUT THE DAY OR THE SUBJECTS
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