Beautiful

BEAUTIFUL


Beautiful is the day when you wake
 
And your eyes meet mine in love

And the shining sun and its warmth

Dim   dull and cold in the shade 

Of your golden aura bathing me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 8:15 AM
wow, a woman that outshines the sun. What excellent metaphor, Sydney!! a question for ya. Soupmail.
Oshin Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 1:34 PM
beautiful is the day i read this poem beautiful are the verses but about the day and subjects.. cant tell of their beauty beautifully wrought, Sydney!
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June 14, 2011 at 1:31 PM
BEAUTIFUL IS THE DAY WHEN I READ THIS POEM... WHAT COMPLEX POEM... SUN AND WARMTH THEN DIM DULL AND COLD... THE VERSES ARE BEAUTIFUL.. DONT KNOW ABOUT THE DAY OR THE SUBJECTS
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