Beautiest

BEAUTIEST Twittering silently in the field Were the beautiest daffodils, Their petals were concealed Amid a flurry of yellow frills.

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/15/2017 4:37:00 PM

a charming observation, sidney! don't know if you made up the word "beautiest" but i really like it...

Sidney Beck
Date: 10/16/2017 10:32:00 AM

Hi Ilene, Glad you liked the wee poem. .....matter of fact the word "beautiest" was a mistake made by one of my foreign students who writes essays for me to correct. It's not a real word but I fell in love with it as soon as I saw it in the essay (which was filled with mistakes !!). Then I whipped up a wee story to make the word usable..........best wishes as always .........Syd