Beautiest

BEAUTIEST


Twittering silently in  the field
Were the beautiest daffodils,
Their petals were concealed
Amid a flurry of yellow frills.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bauer Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 4:37 PM
a charming observation, sidney! don't know if you made up the word "beautiest" but i really like it...
Beck Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 10:32 AM
Hi Ilene, Glad you liked the wee poem. .....matter of fact the word "beautiest" was a mistake made by one of my foreign students who writes essays for me to correct. It's not a real word but I fell in love with it as soon as I saw it in the essay (which was filled with mistakes !!). Then I whipped up a wee story to make the word usable..........best wishes as always .........Syd
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