Beauties Rounded Bum

Responding to James Frasers' "Lips of Velvet Touch"



With eyes of beauty
Powder blue rounded petals
Silky is her bum

Jared Pickett........8/28/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chircop Avatar
November 7, 2009 at 1:42 PM
HAHHA:0THANKS YOU MADE ME SMILE..SKIPPED THIS..cHARMA
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Nice senryu! Keep writing my friend!
Freeman Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 5:27 PM
CHECK MAIL!
Fraser Avatar
August 29, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Smooth flowing Senyru Jared, gorgeous images the reader can picture>>James
Freeman Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 8:12 PM
Hi, Jared, witty verse, partner, Sincerely Moses
Kendrick Avatar
August 28, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Interesting. Sara
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