Beauteous Blossoms

beauteous blossoms 

     adorning all the fruit trees

         ... apples wait their turn





~~~ for Carol Brown's 'apples? oranges?' contest~~~
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June 1, 2011 at 6:14 PM
FRANCINE.!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in CAROL'S contest:-) I'm glad you where among all her chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Francine, this is SO HAIKU. One of my favorites in the contest.Congratulations to you.
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May 28, 2011 at 11:45 PM
fascination in its highest form, francine.. congrats for the high win..:) huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:34 PM
Congrats Francine on your super win in Carol's contest.. another beauty.. enjoy luv..
Gorelick Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:29 PM
I love this one..congrats. BG
Song Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Nice idea for this poem--makes me think of telling the apples to get in line ! Congrats on winning poem- Gwendolen
Osita Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Francine,congrats on your 3rd place win Carol's contest
Phookan Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Francine, yours is such a beautiful haiku that one is left entranced after reading it... Many Congrats on your win,,love, gautami
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May 28, 2011 at 11:02 AM
Wonderful write .Congrats Francine on your 3rd place win....
Horne Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Many congratulations on both your wins, Francine : )
Mehta Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Francine
Freeman Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 6:43 AM
Francine, Great idea, Congratulations on your honored third place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Francine. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 12:05 AM
This is very "haiku" the way you ended it,Francine. I just love that last line!
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May 21, 2011 at 5:49 PM
The lovely blossom is just a prelude to the apple harvest, Francine. Are your apple trees blooming now? The cherry trees bloom in February here, then the pears, peaches and plums. I haven't seen an apple tree in years, but your poem brings back all their glory. You have a great entry for Carol's contest! Winning wishes coming your way. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 5:49 PM
What a way to approach the theme of the apples, Francine. Good luck in the contest,
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