Beating Heart and Frail Bone

17th November 2020

Beating muscle beneath frail skin,
Rigid bone beneath strong muscle,

A warm full of life fleshy heart,
Thumping with feeling and passion,
Taking a stand on your sleeve,
No lies can be told in flesh and blood,

A cold, worm filled, empty rib cage,
Cracked gnarled and hollow,
Hiding away beneath veins and sorrow,
Whispering sweet lies into your skin,

Frail flaky bone,
Brittle stretchy muscle,
When you’re dead and when you’re gone,
Who stays?
The  bone 
Who withers away?
The  heart 
Even in death the empty chasm lies
Even in death the empty chasm consumes
My feeble beating heart devoured by the earth
And the bones who lied their way out of it
I would say by the skin of their teeth
But we both know they don’t have room for it anymore
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Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 11:04 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Juxtaposition contest, Honey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Carber Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 9:59 AM
A clever if rather depressing poem for those who are materialists, believing only matter has reality. I learned a long time ago the body is only a suit, though mine is getting pretty worn and threadbare.
Cunningham Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 2:56 AM
A great entry poem and also a win, congratulations. Tom
Roper Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 7:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 9:55 AM
Hi Honey, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Eversden Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 1:34 PM
thank you! you too :)
One Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 7:06 AM
opening lines are great Honey... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Eversden Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 1:34 PM
thank you it means a lot :)
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