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Beat Out the Rhythm

[NOTE:This is just a bit of silly fun] Beat out this rhythm baby, You can surely do it baby, Beat out this rhythm to the clock! Beat out this rhythm baby, There’s no room in it, for maybe, Do it, with a goofball in a sock! There, is no room for error, We can pull this off together, Beat out our rhythm with your sock! If you feel you cannot play, Try it out, another day, Our rhythm will, never cease to shock! So: Beat out our rhythm baby, There’s no room in here for maybe, Never mind those people who will mock! Beat out the rhythm baby, Do it like your acting crazy, Smash up everything that’s in the shop!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2013 7:25:00 PM
David, congratulations with your poem on Andrea's, favorite list. always~ Linda
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:41:00 AM
Cool and I can hear it in my mind...Let's put music to it!!! enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/23/2010 3:48:00 PM
Smash up the shop!...Yes indeed!...I feel the rhythm and the soul! - Tim
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Date: 2/22/2010 8:36:00 AM
you surely beat with rhythm--lovely--Charma
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Date: 2/21/2010 6:56:00 AM
could hear the beat
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:09:00 AM
THINGS THAT MAKE YOU SAY HMMMMMM!!!!!!!
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Date: 2/20/2010 9:07:00 AM
Wow, this would make a great song, David. I can feel the rhythm already, so how about giving us a melody! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/20/2010 6:16:00 AM
A fun way to start Saturday David.. we need more uplifting poems that make us smile as this one... smile... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry today.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 2/20/2010 3:42:00 AM
Do see a little fun and folly in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2010 1:10:00 AM
Thank you for your comments today David.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/19/2010 8:36:00 PM
I LOVE this crazy thing. I think I'll fav it!! andrea
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Date: 2/19/2010 8:23:00 PM
It may be silly, but it's "good silly", David! Could be the lyrics to a song! Good job! Peace, Audrey P.S. Thanks for your reading and leaving kind comments for me. Peace, Audrey
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