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Beat Down

I try to talk, But i get beat down. I try to walk, But i just get tripped by someone else. I try to stay real, While everyone else is false. I try to speak, But everyone just has a rude remark. I tried to fight, But it only left a mark. I tried to see the good in life, But i just saw a bad sight.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2013 11:29:00 AM

Shout higher than everyone else ...... continue to battle - be real and show who you are Danielle! - Awesome poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Deason
Date: 5/2/2013 11:18:00 AM

i'm not a very loud person...even if i try to be i get talked over :/ Amd i show the real me, in the clothes i wear and the words i write :)