Danielle Deason Poet Free verse

Beat Down

I try to talk,
But i get beat down.
I try to walk,
But i just get tripped by someone else.
I try to stay real,
While everyone else is false.
I try to speak,
But everyone just has a rude remark.
I tried to fight,
But it only left a mark.
I tried to see the good in life,
But i just saw a bad sight.

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Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2013 at 11:29 AM Shout higher than everyone else ...... continue to battle - be real and show who you are Danielle! - Awesome poem! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Danielle Deason May 2, 2013 at 11:18 AM i'm not a very loud person...even if i try to be i get talked over :/ Amd i show the real me, in the clothes i wear and the words i write :)