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Bear With Me

If
you go right
and
I go left …

then perhaps
we can
locate Goldilocks! 

Picture This 2 - 7 Lines Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Joseph May

07/05/21

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Mystic Rose Rose

July 18, 2021 at 6:53 PM

LOL, AND GOLDIE THAT WOULD BE YOU, MY FAMOUS HUMORIST, , CONGRATS DEAR HEART :)

Joseph May

July 14, 2021 at 6:35 AM

Your write is just right Jan, Congrats on your win

Rama Balasubramanian

July 13, 2021 at 6:59 AM

Goog one. I laughed aloud. Thanks and congratulations

Christuraj Alex

July 12, 2021 at 7:26 PM

Beautiful Work. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

July 12, 2021 at 4:54 PM

Congratulations on your great contest win; you deserve it with a very well-penned poem.

Marilene Evans

July 12, 2021 at 3:41 PM

Ha-ha-ha... cute! Way to go. Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2021 at 11:58 AM

oh this is SO cute!!!! this picture was my second choice.

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:13 PM

I just hope Joseph likes it!:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

July 6, 2021 at 3:28 PM

You do have a sense of humor that's perfect!

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:12 PM

thanks Duke i try and think out of the box a little:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Woodrow

July 6, 2021 at 2:44 PM

lol good one :)

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:12 PM

thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 6, 2021 at 12:04 PM

- ... really adorable ... and creative, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:11 PM

thanks Anne-lise hope you are on the road to recovery:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

July 5, 2021 at 9:36 PM

That's quite a creative one, Jan:) awesome:)

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:11 PM

thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

July 5, 2021 at 8:54 PM

Up and down works two ......Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:11 PM

thanks Rico!:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

July 5, 2021 at 6:06 PM

Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha! I tell you what: You take the locks; I'll keep the gold. ~ Belle-ringer

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:10 PM

thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

July 5, 2021 at 5:04 PM

I haven’t even seen yet what the contest requires... but I’ll bet this places high. Fun, Jan. Terry

Jan Allison

July 7, 2021 at 1:10 PM

I hope he likes the humour here Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

Bj Legros Kelley

July 5, 2021 at 2:40 PM

Hahaha! This is adorable! Goldie stole their porridge one too many times!!

Jan Allison

July 5, 2021 at 2:47 PM

thanks BJ:-) hugs Jan xx

Charles Messina

July 5, 2021 at 1:04 PM

LOL...I love it, Jan. Best wishes in the contest... Hugs // Charlie xx

Jan Allison

July 5, 2021 at 1:08 PM

Hope Joseph doesnt mind a fun take on the image!:-) hugs Jan xx

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