Georgiana Elisha Poet Rhyme

Bear

Bear

A pair of bears together
Gather in for a cuddle
A bear with a pear 
And a bear with a ladle
One real and one not
One eats and one not

A still life and a life, the pair
Both giving a bear hug forever.

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Barry Stebbings August 29, 2017 at 1:08 PM Congratulations on your win Georgiana. Cute visual piece. // Barry. Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:13 PM Your pet tiger seems cute too. Kudos to you too!

Charlie Smith August 29, 2017 at 10:52 AM Cuddly good feeling, congratulations Georgianna... Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:14 PM I just love my bear hugs. Thanks :)

Teddy Kimathi August 29, 2017 at 7:32 AM I love the riddle-like take in your work! Congrats Georgiana, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-) Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:28 PM I'm speechless and really happy. Thank you so much for liking it!

Anita Harris August 28, 2017 at 9:46 PM Congratulations on your contest placement! Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:29 PM Thanks Anita!

Gregory Richard Barden August 28, 2017 at 7:27 PM Great one, Georgina - I really enjoyed this! Congrats on the win! :-) Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:31 PM I'm really happy you did. Thanks, Gregory!

Roy Pett August 28, 2017 at 5:29 PM Congratulations on your well deserved win Georgiana, such a lovely poem. :)) Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:31 PM Aww, that's so lovely of you. Thank you so much, Roy.

Andrea Dietrich August 28, 2017 at 5:20 PM Cute, Georgiana. Care bears!!! Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:35 PM Thanks, Andrea. ^^ I can't bear their cuteness too

Dean Wood August 28, 2017 at 3:20 PM A pair of bears, a bear and a pear, a . . . oh I can't keep up! Congratulations Georgiana! Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:33 PM Your piece was so funny and cute! I certainly didn't expect the porcupine to evolve!

Janice Canerdy August 28, 2017 at 3:16 PM Adorable, Georgiana--Congrats on your win. Janice Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:36 PM Thanks for congratulating me, Janice.

John Leong August 26, 2017 at 3:35 AM that was nice! i actually visualised a children's story book with pictures, with bears! cheers! :) Georgiana Elisha September 23, 2017 at 12:37 PM :3 I feel proud that it could make you imagine the scenario. Thanks a lot.

Heidi Sands August 19, 2017 at 6:42 PM This is so sweet. I can picture it. I can also relate to it. I have bear go through my yard :) Georgiana Elisha August 19, 2017 at 7:07 PM Haha, that's a funny pun there! Nice, Heidi