Beacon of Hope - Lind30 Form

O hope, you shine forth your light Like a beacon glowing bright In the dark tunnel of night; How will we, without thee, be set free? 01.26.2022
(7.7.7.9 syllables) (aaab rhyme scheme) For Line Gauthier's "Bite Size Poem No. 39" contest
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Gauthier Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 9:19 PM
Lovely ~
Hutchings Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations, Jo! Your poem is beautiful and inspiring! It makes me feel hopeful when I read it! Excellent job! Much love...Meghan
Goldsmith Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Love this one. Have a blessed day.........
Gibson Avatar
March 16, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Lovely; where would we be without hope. Congratulations.
Alex Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 8:49 PM
Beautiful writing on the theme of light. Congratulations!
George Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 7:00 PM
Wonderful ! Light caught in the best way ! Congratulations on your most deserving win Jo!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 4:58 PM
Just beautiful Jo. Hope and faith keep us headed for the light out of the darkness. So true. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 6, 2022 at 11:40 AM
Succinctly well-said, Jo. I was unclear of what was requested from us, ergo, I did the entire ensemble as a singular tale. Having read a few others, so far I stand alone. Let's say that in my case, the fat lady had sung with clarity whilst I was on a cigarette break, and tho' I don't smoke, I'm just running out of excuses, c'est la vie my friend, Aloha, aka William~moving forward in life.
Mcconnell Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Nice piece of brevity Jo, really well penned! Blessings always,Gordon
Buhagiar Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 9:32 AM
If we lose hope there is no future for us. Blessings.
Cunningham Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 8:52 AM
Following the well lit path will lead us to freedom and salvation. Tom
Pandit Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Much inspiration in this lovely poem, Jo. The ending line spells the essence of your poem.
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