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Beach Wind

salt scented sand, green seaweed laced,
tumbled by surf and white gull paced,
windswept beach
pleasantly blessed long seaside day
when warm breezes waltz with bright, gay
windflowers
I drink pungent scents standing near
where turquoise wears sea foam veneer,
my windfall
Copyright, November 16, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/28/2014 5:51:00 PM
Hi Faye, Very cohesive. Eloquently designed. Great job. Nice win. Earl
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Date: 11/27/2014 5:39:00 PM
so beautiful!! Every one I read is just as bit lovely as the next. congrats.
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:00:00 AM
one great write with sea and wind's flavor, faye..thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win!
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Date: 11/26/2014 12:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Faye. I was happy to see this on the winners list!
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Date: 11/25/2014 8:24:00 PM
Another one I really love, Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2014 7:10:00 PM
vive la difference Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:20:00 PM
Hi Faye, congratulations on your win! I love your theme and how it follows through all the way with the beach theme. Great imagery! Sandra
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:29:00 PM
Brilliantly penned Faye. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:00:00 PM
wonderful imagery and alliteration Faye - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/16/2014 7:41:00 PM
Very cleverly written Faye. I think the Wind choice is a bit more of a challenge than Earth or Fire, but I love the wind and wanted to write about it. I am assuming you love it too? This is a great entry for the contest!#7
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