Faye Gibson Poet Rhyme

Beach Wind

salt scented sand, green seaweed laced,
tumbled by surf and white gull paced, 
 windswept beach

pleasantly blessed long seaside day
when warm breezes waltz with  bright, gay
windflowers

I drink pungent scents standing near
where turquoise wears sea foam veneer,
my windfall

Copyright, November 16, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson

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Earl Schumacker November 28, 2014 at 5:51 PM Hi Faye, Very cohesive. Eloquently designed. Great job. Nice win. Earl

Andrea Dietrich November 27, 2014 at 5:39 PM so beautiful!! Every one I read is just as bit lovely as the next. congrats.

Nette Onclaud November 26, 2014 at 7:00 AM one great write with sea and wind's flavor, faye..thanks for gracing my contest and big congrats on your fine win!

Connie Marcum Wong November 26, 2014 at 12:53 AM Congratulations on your win Faye. I was happy to see this on the winners list!

Maurice Yvonne November 25, 2014 at 8:24 PM Another one I really love, Congratulations on your win.

Debbie Guzzi November 25, 2014 at 7:10 PM vive la difference Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sandra Haight November 25, 2014 at 6:20 PM Hi Faye, congratulations on your win! I love your theme and how it follows through all the way with the beach theme. Great imagery! Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans November 25, 2014 at 5:29 PM Brilliantly penned Faye. Congratulations on your win.

Jan Allison November 25, 2014 at 3:00 PM wonderful imagery and alliteration Faye - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong November 16, 2014 at 7:41 PM Very cleverly written Faye. I think the Wind choice is a bit more of a challenge than Earth or Fire, but I love the wind and wanted to write about it. I am assuming you love it too? This is a great entry for the contest!#7