Beach Sunday

Sunday morning tempted me out to the beach
As the sun tumbled down its' white warmth 
Splashing glisters of light on the near flat water;
Paparazzi pools of a million flashbulbs.

The morning of the last day of the weekend
Tipping point between relaxation and drudgery
Hours of indulgence line up for their embrace;
Hip pockets of foreboding at their climax.

Early morning dog-walkers greet huskily  
Willingly trapped in the endless cycle of pet love
A petrol blue Labrador bunkers about;
Unleaded freedom amongst the beach grass.

Turning, the old train line left-frames the scene
Coarse grass yields to sand and sea
Near distant the old village shop and pub;
Blytonesque imagery from my childhood. 

Returning home to my lazy Sunday brunch
Coherent and intelligible thought pervades
Deliberations on tomorrows' toil dissipate
As I resolve to live in todays' jigsaw piece.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/3/2015 8:53:00 AM
Hi Brendan...long time. I see that you posted this the week I was away. This reminds me of a recent write by Cona Adams, The Best Reward, she posted it yesterday, I think. So full of imagery that the reader feels the scene is right there...The last line is a fitting conclusion...Carpe diem! Loved this!
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Date: 7/3/2015 11:21:00 AM
Hi Kim, Once again many thanks for your kind words of encouragement. I am fortunate to live beside the beach and a recent walk inspired me to write this. Trying to convince myself to LIVE on Sunday rather than waste it by dreading Monday is a weekly task! Cheers, Brendan
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