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Beach Picnic

a seagull joins us swooping down to snatch a chip from sizzling sand-- Dad squeals like the birds as he runs to cool feet in the surf --------- 6/23/14 For Andrea's Contest: "Choose A Season" Summer

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Date: 6/27/2014 5:01:00 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..That sun can be hot..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for stopping by your congrats are appreciated..Sara
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Date: 6/24/2014 3:39:00 PM
Sounds like the perfect Beach Picnic. Two way to avoid the sizzling sand. Very nice Carrie..... Robert..
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Date: 6/24/2014 8:49:00 AM
Cute!
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Date: 6/23/2014 7:36:00 PM
you've managed to perfectly describe summer in this short but wonderful poem, carrie!
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