Beach Pebbles Have Feelings Too

BEACH  PEBBLES  HAVE  FEELINGS  TOO



This stone is enjoying personal recognition at last, 

After a long existence as mere debris or strata:  

Feeling the warmth of my fingers soft against her sandy skin,

Relishing the coming evening conversation with her fellow stones 

As they discuss the stranger who picked one of them up

And talked with her in hushed tones in the rain, 

Washing her in the small lip-lapping waves nearby to admire the better 

Her purples and brown,   as he did years ago when he was a child.

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Written   for   ^Rick   Parise’s   Contest    “STONES”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 2:54 PM
Outstanding, Syd! We pay so little attention to things we find on the beach here, but a child senses to magic and beauty of such a stone. What a lovely entry for Rick's contest. Unique and absolutely delightful to think of how this stranger admires the stone. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 10:23 AM
i love the human attributes you give to these stones, syd... a creative shift so to speak... are my secret folios with you, lol ( joke)... winning's best! :) huggs, nette
Beck Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 12:33 PM
many thanks for the compliment...glad you liked my doggerel Nette....by the way yes i had your folios but I am returning them now, replenished with my new ideas....please feel free to use all my ideas, as usual.....best wishes...Syd
Dietrich Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 7:53 PM
wow, I have not posted mine yet, but I also did personification and from the stone's point of view. Cool way to do it,Sydney. and how cool that you quilted!!
Guzzi Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:05 PM
welcome to your Premium Membership status my friend...ready set BLOG! LOL {How many times have I saved beach stones TOO many to count!] Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 2:30 PM
love it, good luck in the contest Sydney
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