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Beach of Blue

The hard blueish pebbles beneath my feet make the stony trek to the ocean a dangerous undertaking. Barnacles adhere to stones, slicing at passing feet. Past the stony beach the sand awaits. Beyond sand... the sea, blue.

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/2/2011 4:48:00 PM

Beautiful. I just love how you described the sea. What a marvelous picture built! Always Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2011 7:23:00 PM

VEry cool etheree, francine. You did very well with a poetry form which is one of my favorites.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/1/2011 4:06:00 PM

I can feel those rough pebbles on my feet just as I read this wonderful poem. Nice when the sand in smooth but as we know most are more rocky than sandy. Love the image this portrays. love phyl

Bill Lindenmuth

Date: 6/29/2011 5:25:00 AM

nice write Francine, tis the time of year in most places to reflect on the good times by the shore. There is something about it where one word takes you there, here we have many images and cautions of walking on the beach

Don Johnson

Date: 6/28/2011 8:58:00 PM

The picture is there, the water n air, the smell of the salt n the water...well done Francine. love Don thanks 4 info 2

Cory Long

Date: 6/28/2011 4:03:00 PM

this was awesome I loved the images that you created. love cory