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Beach Life

Ain't all it's cracked up to be sand gets everywhere, in your sleeping bag, hair and yes down there too. More arrive every day some even worse off than you, who have nothing, guess that puts them into negative. And the castles that we make wash away with the tide.

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Date: 11/18/2017 7:28:00 PM
YEP! That is beach life.Oh don't forget the one bathroom everyone lines up for. You think with the money they charge for parking at the beach, they wlould put in more washrooms. Have a nice evening my friend.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/19/2017 8:58:00 AM
Thanks Darlene
Date: 11/7/2017 7:43:00 PM
Ah such a poignant picturesque read. I must agree with you, sand can get everywhere. Love your last verse. It captures the essence of this awesome piece. Very clever!
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/9/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thanks Suzanne
Date: 11/7/2017 6:24:00 AM
I've never been a beach person either even though we live in a beach surrounded country. The sand getting in to 'those places' can be quite chafing - :) . Loved your tale Dave...Maria
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 11/9/2017 5:01:00 PM
Thanks Maria
Date: 9/4/2017 1:08:00 PM
Sad, yet well written Dave !
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 9/4/2017 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Heidi

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