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Beach Fun for My Feet

I push my feet blissfully into smooth sun-kissed grains of sand. Taking my feet abruptly from their fun, down to the shore I run. Warm briny sea caresses them; they splash like happy children.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/11/2024 8:54:00 AM

I see those little toes splashing each other. So cute. :)

The Situation

Date: 4/10/2024 10:58:00 AM

Enjoying the short and sweet.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/10/2024 3:15:00 AM

Why have I grown old? I used to swim from June onwards every day and smell that lovely smell of the sea you depicted so beautifully. Hugs.

Ink Empress

Date: 4/10/2024 3:09:00 AM

“ they splash like happy children “ what a soul warming sight youve captured through your well woven words! I love the imagery here and how youv written this in few lines so well! Nailed it dear andrea! Best wishes for the contest

Robert Schatz

Date: 4/9/2024 8:04:00 PM

"Splash like happy children. Awwww; that's so sweet!

Miranda Hawley

Date: 4/9/2024 7:37:00 PM

I am so looking forward to beach weather. Thanks for the poem about it.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/9/2024 7:35:00 PM

Perfect! The 21 wrapped up like a present. Thank you! Angie xx

Paige Hind

Date: 4/9/2024 5:06:00 PM

A very beautiful poem- thanks for your kind words on my win. I liked the flow of this

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/9/2024 4:39:00 PM

enjoyed your poem. Your words ignited memories of squishing my toes in the sand and then running into the sea. Such a delight to read. have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/9/2024 1:14:00 PM

I enjoy the sand and surf too! Fun!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2024 1:10:00 PM

HAPPY FEET indeed lol:-) what a charming poem Andrea xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2024 1:09:00 PM

- Great for your playful feet, Andrea :) - hugs