Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Beach Fun for My Feet

I push my feet blissfully 
into smooth sun-kissed grains of sand.
Taking my feet abruptly from their fun,
 down to the shore I run.
Warm briny sea caresses them; 
they splash like happy children.

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Linda Alice Fowler April 11, 2024 at 8:54 AM I see those little toes splashing each other. So cute. :)

The Situation April 10, 2024 at 10:58 AM Enjoying the short and sweet.

Victor Buhagiar April 10, 2024 at 3:15 AM Why have I grown old? I used to swim from June onwards every day and smell that lovely smell of the sea you depicted so beautifully. Hugs.

Ink Empress April 10, 2024 at 3:09 AM “ they splash like happy children “ what a soul warming sight youve captured through your well woven words! I love the imagery here and how youv written this in few lines so well! Nailed it dear andrea! Best wishes for the contest

Robert Schatz April 9, 2024 at 8:04 PM "Splash like happy children. Awwww; that's so sweet!

Miranda Hawley April 9, 2024 at 7:37 PM I am so looking forward to beach weather. Thanks for the poem about it.

Panagiota Romios April 9, 2024 at 7:35 PM Perfect! The 21 wrapped up like a present. Thank you! Angie xx

Paige Hind April 9, 2024 at 5:06 PM A very beautiful poem- thanks for your kind words on my win. I liked the flow of this

Kim Rodrigues April 9, 2024 at 1:14 PM I enjoy the sand and surf too! Fun!

Jan Allison April 9, 2024 at 1:10 PM HAPPY FEET indeed lol:-) what a charming poem Andrea xx

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2024 at 1:09 PM - Great for your playful feet, Andrea :) - hugs