Beach Display

My neighbor Ken loves to display
 those tanned, boney ribs on the bay ;

He thinks it's really darn cute 
to look like a dried out mute...

While ladies roar out, 'stay away!'





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John Freeman’s Personal quotes
5/21/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
June 19, 2015 at 12:06 AM
NETTE, Congrats on your win. **SKAT**
Freeman Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:38 PM
Great humor, Nette, Loved it, Agape, Moses
A   Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Nette :) Congratulations on your Dumb and Dumber Personal quote win.... WUV ~LINDA~
Makama Avatar
May 27, 2015 at 6:36 AM
excellent piece. returning after a while to read such a refreshing package full of familiar emotions to the mind is simply blissful. A wonderful and commanding 7 here. Keep on writing.
Hamilton Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 6:50 PM
like this one Nette gl in contest hugs 7
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 7:47 PM
well done, Nette. I love that quote too. How cool, it's YOURS!!
Andresen Avatar
May 20, 2015 at 12:58 PM
- Fun (it sounds like me .... snoring :)) - Great !!! - I wish you luck in the contest, Nette !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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