Beach Days

sun's wrath red rimmed blaze
bathers bronzed
dolphins arcs graceful

6th grade7th gradebeachhaiku

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Bill Baker

November 3, 2023 at 3:54 PM

Your imagery is vivid, my friend. Nice Haiku! I'm following your poetry now, and I hope you'll follow mine also. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Regina Elliott

November 3, 2023 at 4:57 PM

My deep thanks, Bill, you're so kind. I really love the poetry of both you and Sara. You're both so gifted. My family and I have friends in Magnolia,TX. My late husband Mike spent his high school years in Nacogdoches, and we keep in contact with his friends who went to school with him there. They moved to Magnolia a few years ago. Will be following you & Sara's poetry too. ~

Sara Kendrick

November 2, 2023 at 6:25 AM

I enjoyed reading this one. I bet some of those bathers went away with some painful sunburn. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Regina Elliott

November 3, 2023 at 5:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara, for visiting my page. I thought I'd bring a little bit of summer into these chilly autumnal days. Hugs xx

Kim Rodrigues

November 2, 2023 at 5:02 AM

I can feel the heat, see the bathers and feel the excitement of seeing the dolphins and also the dolphins playful excitement. It’s like a 3-ring circus at the beach :) God bless you, dear Gina!

Regina Elliott

November 2, 2023 at 6:07 AM

My deepest thanks, good poetry friend. Many of God's blessings to you and yours. ~

Howard Kerr

November 1, 2023 at 5:25 PM

Regina, The ultimate picturesque haiku. An elegant execution of a tricky poetry form. Deepest gratitude for comments on Utter Silken Threads Take good care Howard Kerr

Regina Elliott

November 2, 2023 at 4:39 AM

Thank you so much for your unwavering support, Howard. You are a steadfast friend. I hope your day is creative and inspirational. ~

Regina Elliott

November 1, 2023 at 4:03 PM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. I'm glad you got to swim with dolphins, they are truly the angels of the sea. When I was in Navy boot camp in Orlando, Florida, I got a one day pass to Sea World. There were a few dolphin petting tanks. I gently petted one, it was a joyful day. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem.