Beach Buddies

I’m sitting silently listening to the swoosh swoosh of the sea
Children paddle in icy sapphire water, so young and carefree
Their screams of innocent laughter are ringing in my ear
I reminisce of my childhood and dream of yesteryear

Of days before computers and the electronic age
Mobile phones weren’t invented, now they are all the rage
Bleep Bleep Bleep oh how irritating, it is a constant noise
But now they are essential to many young girls and boys

Life so full of simple pleasures, wind blowing through my hair
Running round barefooted with kites floating in mid air
Digging spectacular sandcastles with a dramatic moat
Splashing around in the sea together in a tiny little boat

Enjoying a perfect picnic on the golden sand
Getting an ice cream and it melting down my hand
Finding stunning starfish and a pretty pink seashell
Take them into school to display at show and tell

Climbing into craggy rock pools with a fishing net
Falling on the rocks getting clothes soaking wet
Bathing beauties on the beach topping up a tan
Suns rays beating down they wish they had a fan

08~-2~14

Written for Vibrant Verse Contest 2 Sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 11:09 PM
This was descriptive. Just mentioned to my wife today that summer won't be summer if we don't get to the ocean. wonderful poem.
Davis Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Jan simple pleasures can be found if we just open our eyes and look with our hearts. Thank you for the great comment on my My Advice poem
Allison Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 11:51 AM
Thanks as ever Robin for your lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 10:18 PM
boy, you are so right about the kids today and their damn cell phones. All these simple pleasures were displayed with great descriptive words, Jan. HOpe to see this on the winners' list.
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 5:00 AM
I don't know if it is classed as 'verse' in line with the contest Andrea but I had fun writing it anyway. Thanks for the lovely comment. hugs jan xxx
Duggan Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Jan what a great poem, that is just how it was when I was growing up, these days kids are zombies, my grandchildren come over to spend the weekend with us and you don't see them they are sitting in the bedroom with their eyes glued to these machines, they don't even hear you talk to them which is quite rude...........Take care my friend...Vera.........
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:42 PM
How society has changed Vera and sadly not for the better - i ma so glad i was brought up with simple pleasures and not bombarded by technology and materiel things i am sure we are better off for it! Hugs Jan xxx
Parker Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:24 PM
when I think of the changes from my own childhood to those of my grand children I can't help but think of how frightened my grand parents must have been going from horses to the jet plane
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:30 PM
My parents are 90 and 91 - oh how things have changed so much in their lifetime. My Grandfather was one of the first people in his area to own a car - how times have changed and not all for the better I have to say! Would love to go back to the simple things in life - but I imagine for some people that would be so difficult. Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:30 PM
How great of a time to be had at the beach Jan. Very descriptive...hugs Tim
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:05 PM
I would put free verse
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Not sure if it is classed as 'verse' for the contest but i used as much description and imagery as i could - was a fun write anyway:-) Hugs as ever. Jan xxxx
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:25 PM
so upbeat I'm there with you, jan, all tanned!.. huggs
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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