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Beach Blanket Bingo

Beneath the umbrella rainbow canopy, Elvis croons from an old man’s radio. As he smears lotion on his nose and knees, Children hop by screaming in stereo Hot hot hot! The sand’s hot on my feet! Blasting sand onto sun-bathing girls, Laughing boys race to the sea. Avid readers get lost in their worlds, Not noticing the shade retreat. Kite flyers whirl and twirl, Enjoying the breeze on the beach, That causes the beach towels to curl. Buried treasure inspires kids Into digging deep in the sand. Names are called when it’s time to quit; Grown-ups leave, relaxed and tanned. Optimistic for tomorrow’s plan, of more beach blanket bliss! Received 3rd place in the "Beach Blanket Bingo" Contest

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Date: 7/9/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations Susan on your 3rd place win with this wonderful Acrostic. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 7/8/2011 8:49:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on the win....really great...love it much*_*junjun
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Date: 7/7/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations-great poem!
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Date: 7/7/2011 2:52:00 PM
Well done on your placement in Linda's contest with this entry, Susan. Good stuff, my friend. Hugs, Licia. xxx
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:59:00 AM
Many congrats on your well deserved win, Susan : )
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Date: 7/6/2011 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations Susan on your win in Linda-Marie's "Beach Blanket Bingo" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2011 8:28:00 PM
wow,susan, I really enjoyed yours the way you described the various types of characters on the beach. I am the book worm writing poems on the beach!! congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/5/2011 6:21:00 PM
Love this one....the hot sand on bare feet, makes me smile...who hasn't had that joyful and painful moment!! :) Congratulations!!
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:58:00 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, Susan
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:16:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/5/2011 3:44:00 PM
Congrats Susan on third place with this stunning entry luv..thankxxx..
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Date: 6/17/2011 10:00:00 PM
oh, yes, I DID enjoy it already. I so remember it!
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Date: 6/14/2011 10:32:00 PM
hey, what a cute rhyming acrostic and you put it back in Elvis' time! Or the music anyway. Me likes!
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:19:00 PM
Susan you need to put your name and contest here...
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:09:00 PM
Full of fun on the beach,lovely description of the atmosphere there Susan.. Good luck in Linda's contest dear and thank you for the lovely comments on my Alice poem. love, gautami
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Date: 6/13/2011 12:13:00 PM
they made a lot of movies by this title in the 60's or one any way. love this write, very creative. thank you for commenting on Free Apples.
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:54:00 AM
Lovely write, Susan. I'm totally stumped with this one at the moment - can't think of anything for it!
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:15:00 AM
Susan love the imagery in your Acrostic, all the best for Linda's contest, you make me yearn for Summer now.. ;-)
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Date: 6/13/2011 3:46:00 AM
Good, descriptive write...made all the harder by the strict guidelines! Well done. Good luck in the contest. Love and best wishes, Robert.
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:44:00 PM
thankxx Susan for supporting my current contest ..good luck luv.. am sure will be super impressed with your entry ..reading in full at judging time so as not to spoil my fun..luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 5:15:00 PM
nicely penned good luck in the contest. cory
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