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Beach Beauty

beach that's long and white
    seen through the coconut palm
        picture perfect view












13 April  2015
SKAT's Picture Perfect Haiku #1 Contest

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Norman Crocker

Date: 7/22/2015 1:41:00 PM

Very good! I can see it.

Sandy Tadros

Date: 6/24/2015 9:34:00 AM

So descriptive!

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/16/2015 10:30:00 AM

A lovely write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim M

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/15/2015 8:39:00 PM

lovely win, Luv ~LINDA~

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2015 12:15:00 PM

Kim, I just stopped by to congratulate you on your win:) Alexis

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2015 11:10:00 AM

a very nice view!! Congrats on the win, Kim

Aiyah Torres

Date: 6/14/2015 10:53:00 AM

I can almost see the paradise... (Bora) congrats Kim !!! :O))

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2015 10:52:00 AM

Rereading this haiku confirms my original views...beautiful; congratulations on a lovely win, Kim:) hugs // paul

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/14/2015 4:37:00 AM

lovely Kim congrats on placing hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 9:01:00 PM

Hi, Kim. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/13/2015 10:39:00 PM

Picture perfect indeed. So much more enthralling in real life though! Fantastic poem, I love going to the beach. You paint the picture beautifully with the "white sands" and the "coconut palm". Always, Laura

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/8/2015 9:45:00 PM

You paint a picture of beauty here. You stuck to the 5 7 5 formation which is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Paul Callus

Date: 5/8/2015 1:49:00 PM

Wow! Delightful! You make a great photographer, Kim, and a big tease!! #7+ Hopefully you are on holiday:) hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2015 2:24:00 PM

another beautiful view!