Beach Beauty

beach that's long and white
    seen through the coconut palm
        picture perfect view












13 April  2015
SKAT's Picture Perfect Haiku #1 Contest
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Crocker Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Very good! I can see it.
Tadros Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 9:34 AM
So descriptive!
Merryman Avatar
June 16, 2015 at 10:30 AM
A lovely write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim M
A   Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 8:39 PM
lovely win, Luv ~LINDA~
Y. Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM
Kim, I just stopped by to congratulate you on your win:) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 11:10 AM
a very nice view!! Congrats on the win, Kim
Torres Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 10:53 AM
I can almost see the paradise... (Bora) congrats Kim !!! :O))
Callus Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Rereading this haiku confirms my original views...beautiful; congratulations on a lovely win, Kim:) hugs // paul
Hamilton Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 4:37 AM
lovely Kim congrats on placing hugs
A  Avatar
June 13, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Hi, Kim. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**
Breidenthal Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Picture perfect indeed. So much more enthralling in real life though! Fantastic poem, I love going to the beach. You paint the picture beautifully with the "white sands" and the "coconut palm". Always, Laura
Anish Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 9:45 PM
You paint a picture of beauty here. You stuck to the 5 7 5 formation which is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Wow! Delightful! You make a great photographer, Kim, and a big tease!! #7+ Hopefully you are on holiday:) hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 2:24 PM
another beautiful view!
Johnson Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 12:19 PM
Words worth a thousand pictures! Enjoyed very much.
De Paz Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 9:46 AM
Simple and effective, as any haiku should be, Kim
Vaso Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 8:18 PM
This was so good, I feel that you should now be responsible for taking me to the beach!!! :)
Yvonne Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 3:45 PM
Cool Ku Kim, thank you!
Mcdaid Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 7:25 AM
beautifully painted piece kim wishing you a lovely week
Devnath  Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Beautiful natural picture drawn with beautiful words. Coconut trees adds more beauty to the beaches. 7, Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Williams Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Yes, I will be in that--nothing like a tropical island. ....Well done Kim----John
Williams Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Yes I think I am starting to think like a tourist.----John
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Weeeeee let's go!!!.. :D! ~olive eloisa
Onclaud Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 11:50 PM
reminds me of boracay and our other beaches, kim.. well done!.. huggs
Meade Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 9:04 PM
What about those beautiful tan bodies along the beach?? Just kidding -- nature is by far the beauty here and you captured it nicely!!
Smith Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 6:07 PM
the perfect setting...lovely Tim
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