Beach Beauty

beach that's long and white
    seen through the coconut palm
        picture perfect view












13 April  2015
SKAT's Picture Perfect Haiku #1 Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/22/2015 1:41:00 PM
Very good! I can see it.
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Date: 6/24/2015 9:34:00 AM
So descriptive!
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Date: 6/16/2015 10:30:00 AM
A lovely write, Kim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim M
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Date: 6/15/2015 8:39:00 PM
lovely win, Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:15:00 PM
Kim, I just stopped by to congratulate you on your win:) Alexis
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Date: 6/14/2015 11:10:00 AM
a very nice view!! Congrats on the win, Kim
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:53:00 AM
I can almost see the paradise... (Bora) congrats Kim !!! :O))
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:52:00 AM
Rereading this haiku confirms my original views...beautiful; congratulations on a lovely win, Kim:) hugs // paul
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Date: 6/14/2015 4:37:00 AM
lovely Kim congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 6/13/2015 9:01:00 PM
Hi, Kim. Congratulations, thank you for the Picture Perfect Haiku **SKAT**
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Date: 5/13/2015 10:39:00 PM
Picture perfect indeed. So much more enthralling in real life though! Fantastic poem, I love going to the beach. You paint the picture beautifully with the "white sands" and the "coconut palm". Always, Laura
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Date: 5/8/2015 9:45:00 PM
You paint a picture of beauty here. You stuck to the 5 7 5 formation which is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/8/2015 1:49:00 PM
Wow! Delightful! You make a great photographer, Kim, and a big tease!! #7+ Hopefully you are on holiday:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/16/2015 2:24:00 PM
another beautiful view!
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Date: 4/16/2015 12:19:00 PM
Words worth a thousand pictures! Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 4/16/2015 9:46:00 AM
Simple and effective, as any haiku should be, Kim
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Date: 4/15/2015 8:18:00 PM
This was so good, I feel that you should now be responsible for taking me to the beach!!! :)
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Date: 4/15/2015 3:45:00 PM
Cool Ku Kim, thank you!
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Date: 4/15/2015 7:25:00 AM
beautifully painted piece kim wishing you a lovely week
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Date: 4/14/2015 2:33:00 PM
Beautiful natural picture drawn with beautiful words. Coconut trees adds more beauty to the beaches. 7, Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 4/14/2015 9:35:00 AM
Yes, I will be in that--nothing like a tropical island. ....Well done Kim----John
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Date: 4/14/2015 9:48:00 AM
Yes I think I am starting to think like a tourist.----John
Date: 4/14/2015 7:19:00 AM
Weeeeee let's go!!!.. :D! ~olive eloisa
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Date: 4/13/2015 11:50:00 PM
reminds me of boracay and our other beaches, kim.. well done!.. huggs
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Date: 4/13/2015 9:04:00 PM
What about those beautiful tan bodies along the beach?? Just kidding -- nature is by far the beauty here and you captured it nicely!!
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:07:00 PM
the perfect setting...lovely Tim
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