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Beach

The horizon cuts straight, long, hard
silently declining less than a degree

like toys across a cartoon’s one frame stillness
a small yacht rocks like a child’s boat
a helicopter putters, a small jet silently
bellies over the sea thundering suddenly
against a graded blue sky
children flying a kite
a plummeting twisting tied bird in its death throes
falling from the warm seemingly red-speckled blue 
broken only by a smudge of grey cloud

curling white-tipped waves swirl against rocks
a lonely Zen-meditative crab in their shade

the sand, ridged, striated, pockmarked
small holes left as bubbling miniature blowholes
fine lines webbed around 
sand rippled like the sea, waved and cleansed 
a poetic transgression? – Neptune’s impost?
the soap-sud foam his in-coming joyful jouissance 
the thin receding water a pin-spot bridal veil
and a bridal train, its white scalloped lace edge
pleating, folding, hiding under the next wave
in rippling curving line-patterns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/23/2018 3:43:00 PM
You have a great vocabulary..
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Susan Baquie
Date: 2/24/2018 2:01:00 AM
Th nk you for reading my poetry. I do appreciate it and I will catch up on some of yours as soon as I can.
Date: 11/4/2016 7:34:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery.
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Susan Baquie
Date: 11/4/2016 10:15:00 PM
Thank you for your comment - it is much appreciated

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