Be Told

BE TOLD *********** azure blue sky, sun shines free, swallows dip and glide, agree. swifts on their way, what for them? fickle weather a problem! nature must regain control. climate change blows hot and cold! wear warm clothes if on a stroll. natures still fickle, be told!
Eight Lines Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May 05/26/18
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Roper Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 11:03 AM
An artist eye sees the imagery in nature, but also creative in forming a graph on syllable count,Mick, great rhyme and flow of the verse. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Talbot Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Many thank on all counts Eve. Mick
Gentry Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fun poem about nature. I really enjoyed. See SoupMail.
Talbot Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Thanks, Susan. Mick
Gauthier Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 9:26 PM
Lovely, Mick. Congrats on your top win.
May Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 7:28 PM
"The weather is often very fickle"..Nicely penned Mick
Talbot Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 8:46 PM
Thank you most kindly, Joseph. Mick
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