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Be Told

BE TOLD *********** azure blue sky, sun shines free, swallows dip and glide, agree. swifts on their way, what for them? fickle weather a problem! nature must regain control. climate change blows hot and cold! wear warm clothes if on a stroll. natures still fickle, be told!
Eight Lines Poetry Contest sponsored by Joseph May 05/26/18

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Date: 6/5/2018 11:03:00 AM
An artist eye sees the imagery in nature, but also creative in forming a graph on syllable count,Mick, great rhyme and flow of the verse. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/5/2018 11:51:00 AM
Many thank on all counts Eve. Mick
Date: 6/4/2018 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fun poem about nature. I really enjoyed. See SoupMail.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/4/2018 6:35:00 AM
Thanks, Susan. Mick
Date: 6/3/2018 9:26:00 PM
Lovely, Mick. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:28:00 PM
"The weather is often very fickle"..Nicely penned Mick
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/3/2018 8:46:00 PM
Thank you most kindly, Joseph. Mick

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