Be Strong (Re-Post)

Tempestuous heart As you change moods In the stormy seas of life Do not give up your hope It is with grave consequence That you would give in and give up It is with remorse that we would eulogize The demise of your hope, the passing of dreams Do not succumb to the tempest Be strong as the source of life Symbolically as well, of love Exist for those who live for you Waiver not in the winds of despair Oh, great and glorious heart Beat on as the rhythm Of all existence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Omaidin Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 5:31 AM
This poem is absolutely great and shapes up really well. I really like your use of stormy seas and tempests, very strong poem. regards Déirdre
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February 3, 2009 at 12:40 AM
Like the shape of this one Michael.Rgds Brian re your comment about the 'footle' form here is the note I posted when I introduced it here on PS Note A footle-2 lines,2 syllbles with a title-Light verse form,witty,pertinent,topical etc (technically a trochaic monometer)hence I label the form as a footle best exampled by the famous FLEAS Adam had'em.
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