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People can save the world by the way they think and by the way they behave and what they hold to be important. By Cyndi Lauper
To utterly assume someone else's position Hide under a mask and retain your volition Put on fresh skin all the way over your body Lead as the other one goes, tamed by the toddy To utterly put oneself in other people's shoes First, pick the cut and fabric he would peruse Then you travel along the route he has chosen Scoot your inner biases and set your heart frozen You need to pick exact spells and praise And fresh benchmarks are bound to amaze Alter the family, loop of friends, and hairstyle Then you buy a whole hot attire and a smile How about wording, etiquette, and culture? It's tedious, as others can opine you're a vulture You then put his clothes and shoes on the shelf And determine that you ought to be yourself You, in turn, understand his previous utterances You also cease judging and tallying preferences You draw judgments and then forsake him as well As you shine up your own lumpy skills, can't you tell? Written: April 12, 2024 Write A Poem As Someone Else Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Matt Caliri

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Date: 4/13/2023 3:34:00 PM
To utterly put oneself in other people's shoes First, pick the cut and fabric he would peruse Then you travel along the route he has chosen--great advice to be someone else!
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Date: 4/13/2023 10:03:00 AM
I enjoyed your write/picture. Good Luck. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 4/12/2023 7:17:00 PM
You have written a very good poem, Sotto. We often use the cliche' "walking in another man's shoes" but in reality it is an impossibility. (IMO) Growing older and experiencing life tends to make folks less judgemental, not always of course but generally speaking. It's easier to see how a situation can snowball quickly.
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Date: 4/12/2023 10:14:00 AM
Your entry was a unique ways of showing what it's like to walk in anothers shoes for awhile and gain new perspective on their thoughts. Thank you for the mindful thoughts you display through your poetry my dear friend. I'm back! I'll be visiting and reading more often now. Have a great week! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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