Be Quiet

shush... can you hear that? 
listening to the silence 
that is awareness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Thomas Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 2:17 PM
What awareness the silence brings would depend greatly on the one listening wouldn't it... Nice PM
Carber Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 12:36 PM
A nice little senryu!
Kiser Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Yes, so true.
Trifiatis Avatar
September 29, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Profound!
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 3:39 PM
very nice!
Warrior Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Nicely crafted haiku my friend...many things lurk in our silence...shhh, great read...love & shush...^WW^
Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 5:22 AM
Amazing what you managed to say in such a little bit of space. I hope everyone is listening. I am.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 8:38 PM
Nice one! xomo
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