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Be Positive

Putrid pus proliferates/purposely preventing progression's passionate plea - stifled cries... Always ascending...and, assiduously avoiding any acrimonious amounts accrued along apathetic apertures..."Still I Rise!" Incessantly fighting the urge to just drop out of this rancid Rat Race we call living Still, to abandon sanguine thoughts totally topples the tenacious toughness that took time to temper...never stop giving Enervated entities economically embattled Man, each day we face trouble/In every Third World A Struggle - singed and burned I'm like stubble/but, like The Ashes Of The Phoenix to Resurrect from this rubble Sometimes I shift towards arrogance; The Good Lord Keeps me humble Lifting languid limbs loftily to overcome this present Flood Be Positive is my motto, the flip side? It's my Blood... B+

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/3/2024 9:13:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Meanwhile, I greet you with a Joyous New Year with this prayer from the Bible in Numbers 6:24-26, "The Lord bless thee, and keep thee: The Lord make his face shine upon thee, and be gracious unto thee: The Lord lift up his countenance upon thee, and give thee peace."

Narinder Bhangu

Date: 3/26/2015 8:55:00 PM

More than 90 % people are with B+ blood group, they spread the message of B+, to rise from this rubble. And, the world runs. It is nicely woven poem going deeper inside, each word is enjoyable. I liked Incessantly fighting the urge to just drop out of this rancid Rat Race we call living. Of course, we, all, are in rat's alley. Indeed, I enjoy. thanks. Narinder

Poetiq1der Simmons
Date: 3/26/2015 9:11:00 PM