Be My Love

Some body once told me that earthly love
is not real but full of infatuation,
that true love is celestial from above,
like the one Christ had for our situation.

I believe this whole heartily without doubt,
but seeing you,sent me into strange abyss,
where I`m alone,confused and wonder about,
Sweet vibes flow through my vein like peaceful bliss.

Your sweet voice is melodiously thrilling,
which makes me lose concentration in class,
I struggle within to control this feeling,
which is real not virtual for you~dear lass.

Give me a chance to show you how I feel,
For no girl has ever captured my heart,
except you;for this love is so sure and real,
Please!give it a thought for this is a fact,
for a space in your heart which is not an act.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 6:05 PM
OLUSEGUN. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA"
Carter Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:41 PM
a lovely romantic write:-) hugs jan xx
A  Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:39 PM
OLUSEGUN, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE
Nance Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 2:08 PM
Nicely done ;)
Kimathi Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 10:05 AM
Congrats to you for your WIN Olusegun! :-)
A  Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:10 PM
OLUSEGUN, Congratulations, that is all :-) **SKAT WAS HERE** <---- copy paste.... hardy har har
A   Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD
Anglesey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 6:36 PM
A very lovely and heartfelt Valentine poem. Congrats on your win in the contest :)
Posey Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 11:29 AM
My friend, your sincerity will gain entry into many hearts....Congrats on your win.... Jake
A  Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:49 PM
Olusegun, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~
Horne Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 7:26 AM
i'm sure you melted her heart, my friend. many congrats on your wins
K. Avatar
April 9, 2012 at 8:39 AM
This is such a sweet write, Olusegun! Now you have to go ahead and say who this lovely girl is :D --thank you for passing by my poem with your encouraging words :) -- congrats as well on all your wins :D
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 4:39 PM
Yes, everyone deserves a chance in love. - Wish you good luck in love and contest ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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