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Be Like Water

 
Water . . . we need to keep alive, and to spiritually thrive; and water is a healing balm, be like water fluid and calm . . . It cleanses both body and mind, and deep tranquil peace will be twined; let water flow over your palm, be like water fluid and calm . . . A scared symbol of divine life, it will soothe your personal strife; the sound releases any qualm, be like water fluid and calm . . . Seek the whispering blue ocean, a rippling stream's gentle motion; God speaks of water in a psalm, be like water fluid and calm . . . _____________________ August 13, 2022 Poetry/Kyrielle/Be Like Water Copyright Protected, ID 08-1479-737-13 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Kyrielle About Water sponsor, Kim Rodrigues, Judged 09/24/2022
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Horne Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 12:19 PM
this is really beautiful, my friend - awesome last line
La France Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 4:13 PM
Jack, thank you so much for the visit and compliment on my poem ~
Proxenos Avatar
August 20, 2022 at 12:30 AM
A lovely write - water is calming and soothing makes one feel relaxed and unburdened. Good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
La France Avatar
August 21, 2022 at 4:14 PM
Jennifer, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement, hugs and blessings ~
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