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Be Happy

First Real Love By: Aidan Gilbert That night I found love My eyes meet yours; warmth hit hard Magic heart, possessed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/10/2016 12:02:00 AM
Great way to fall in love, Lovely Senryu.
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Date: 11/3/2015 10:50:00 PM
love the sweet magic. LINDA
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Date: 7/31/2015 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:25:00 PM
thanks
Date: 7/31/2015 7:57:00 AM
Sweet Haiku
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:25:00 PM
thankyou
Date: 7/31/2015 7:35:00 AM
Aww that was so warm and happy how can anyone not smile after reading this :)
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:25:00 PM
thanks for the win
Date: 7/31/2015 1:27:00 AM
Aidan, Congratulations... SKAT
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:26:00 PM
thanks
Date: 7/30/2015 11:56:00 PM
An absolute belter of a poem, Aidan, well done. Regards, Viv
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:26:00 PM
thankyou
Date: 7/30/2015 11:15:00 PM
Congrats on ur brilliant winning work Aidan! Keep ur pen flowing!
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Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:26:00 PM
thanks