Be Happy

First Real Love By: Aidan Gilbert That night I found love My eyes meet yours; warmth hit hard Magic heart, possessed

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Date: 4/10/2016 12:02:00 AM

Great way to fall in love, Lovely Senryu.

Date: 11/3/2015 10:50:00 PM

love the sweet magic. LINDA

Date: 7/31/2015 8:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:25:00 PM

thanks

Date: 7/31/2015 7:57:00 AM

Sweet Haiku

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:25:00 PM

thankyou

Date: 7/31/2015 7:35:00 AM

Aww that was so warm and happy how can anyone not smile after reading this :)

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:25:00 PM

thanks for the win

Date: 7/31/2015 1:27:00 AM

Aidan, Congratulations... SKAT

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:26:00 PM

thanks

Date: 7/30/2015 11:56:00 PM

An absolute belter of a poem, Aidan, well done. Regards, Viv

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:26:00 PM

thankyou

Date: 7/30/2015 11:15:00 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning work Aidan! Keep ur pen flowing!

Aidan Gilbert
Date: 7/31/2015 4:26:00 PM

thanks