Be Happy

First Real Love
By: Aidan Gilbert

That night I found love
My eyes meet yours; warmth hit hard
Magic heart, possessed

appreciationfirst lovelovemagichaiku

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M Asim Nehal

April 10, 2016 at 12:02 AM

Great way to fall in love, Lovely Senryu.

Poet Destroyer A

November 3, 2015 at 10:50 PM

love the sweet magic. LINDA

Richard Lamoureux

July 31, 2015 at 8:34 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Aidan Gilbert

July 31, 2015 at 4:25 PM

thanks

James Inman

July 31, 2015 at 7:57 AM

Sweet Haiku

Aidan Gilbert

July 31, 2015 at 4:25 PM

thankyou

Casarah Nance

July 31, 2015 at 7:35 AM

Aww that was so warm and happy how can anyone not smile after reading this :)

Aidan Gilbert

July 31, 2015 at 4:25 PM

thanks for the win

Skat A

July 31, 2015 at 1:27 AM

Aidan, Congratulations... SKAT

Aidan Gilbert

July 31, 2015 at 4:26 PM

thanks

Viv Wigley

July 30, 2015 at 11:56 PM

An absolute belter of a poem, Aidan, well done. Regards, Viv

Aidan Gilbert

July 31, 2015 at 4:26 PM

thankyou

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 30, 2015 at 11:15 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning work Aidan! Keep ur pen flowing!

Aidan Gilbert

July 31, 2015 at 4:26 PM

thanks

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