Be Good

Children
Oh goodness!
Stop filtering money
Mamita's sick, papa's away.
be good.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
Adeite Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 9:52 AM
Congratulations friend, on having your poem featured this week. Please keep writing. Great you! Adeleke
Jordan Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 7:27 PM
Amour - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Moreno Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 1:28 AM
Amour, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
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September 14, 2009 at 4:32 PM
Interesting reflection carried in just five lines. Much for the reader to ponder. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen
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September 14, 2009 at 3:50 PM
congrats on a featured poem!!
Brown Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 4:05 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Amour. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 1:33 PM
Amour, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Mason Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 1:42 PM
Congratulations on your writing being selected as a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest, Amour !!
Brown Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Amour. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Adeite Avatar
April 4, 2009 at 9:58 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
Burton Avatar
August 9, 2008 at 9:14 AM
another great piece. Ilike it alot and it says so much without writing much,a talent I wasnt blessed with.great poem going in the favs.
Young Avatar
July 17, 2008 at 7:40 PM
cleverly written. simple yet the premise speaks the unspoken. with much love and friendship, GiNoLoCo
Degenhardt Avatar
July 16, 2008 at 4:42 AM
The form seems great while the sentiment of the read comes through clearly and with a smooth flow to it. Very well done! Michael
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