Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

Be God's Greeter

Do not let gloom get in your way
at start of day.
God gave the sun
to everyone.

When the sun shines, borrow a beam
and let it gleam
inside your soul.
Swallow it whole!

Let it light a smile on your face.
Radiate grace.
Be God's greeter.
Make life sweeter!

For The Being A Light To Others Poetry Contest of Anoucheka Gangabissoon

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Kim Merryman August 4, 2021 at 7:26 PM Andrea, this is so uplifting and cheerful! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M

Bhawana Pant August 3, 2021 at 8:37 PM Wow! What an amazing poem!

Christuraj Alex August 3, 2021 at 8:00 PM Another congratulation!

CayCay Godwin July 30, 2021 at 2:43 PM How pretty - a light-weight feel enticing one to embrace the moment. I bet this well written gem took shape fairly quickly with your talented pen. A joy to read. LOVE ... CayCay

Anne E Sangster - K July 28, 2021 at 7:00 AM This is absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. So uplifting. A big fav for me :-) Cheers Anne

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2021 at 5:06 AM As you always do, sweet Andrea! Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman July 27, 2021 at 9:32 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea! So many wonderful lines but I especially love the concept of being an ambassador for God - God's greeter! If we all embraced that idea this world would be a truly amazing place - sweet Heaven!

Joanna Daniel July 27, 2021 at 6:14 AM Such an inspiring poem, Andrea, congratulations:)

Beryl Edmonds July 26, 2021 at 10:54 AM Congratulations Andrea, win well deserved, wonderful lines you’ve written… Belle

Christuraj Alex July 26, 2021 at 9:55 AM I had already commented on this work. Coming back to congratulate you. Hearty Congratulations!

Alexis Y. July 26, 2021 at 9:51 AM Hi Andrea, I’m not surprised to see you in the top spot. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy July 26, 2021 at 9:28 AM I'm back to congratulate you on your win, Andrea. Janice

Paula Goldsmith July 26, 2021 at 9:06 AM Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful/inspiring write. Yes, "Be God's Greeter" each new day. Have a blessed day................

Eve Roper July 26, 2021 at 8:24 AM Great imagery and feeling in your verse, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Curtis Johnson July 26, 2021 at 7:08 AM Congrats on your top placement. This is a great piece of work. Blessings.

Joseph May July 26, 2021 at 5:51 AM Lovely write Andrea, Congrats on your win

Rama Balasubramanian July 25, 2021 at 6:47 AM Great way to greet sun. Well penned!

David Kavanagh July 25, 2021 at 4:13 AM A very positive poem Andrea, and perfect for the contest, I think Sara makes a valid point when depressed you honestly don’t notice the sun shining, but that’s a whole different story, for a different poem, definitely a big contender, best of luck, cheers David

Sara Kendrick July 24, 2021 at 5:06 PM For those feeling truly depressed it is not as easy as it seems. Sunlight and exercise do help overcome depression but it is hard for a depressed person to get that far. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go! Sara

Heidi Sands July 24, 2021 at 12:57 PM Very nice. Inspiring. I like borrow a beam :)

Supraja Kannan July 24, 2021 at 1:08 AM Beautifully said, Andrea ...

Delice Arleen Skelly July 23, 2021 at 10:42 PM Nice one Andrea, good luck in the contest...Delice

Constance La France July 23, 2021 at 9:36 AM Andrea, a wonderful poem you have penned within the restrictions of syllables and lines ~ love and serenity _Constance

Alexis Y. July 23, 2021 at 9:14 AM WoW! Andrea, I love the positivity in your write. Each line was amazing, especially your title and line three of the third stanza. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2021 at 6:27 AM Awww this is delightful. Hugs Rick.

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