Demetrios Trifiatis Poet Free verse

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" CONSCIOUSNESS " MY PHOTO, ©

Be Fair

Oh, my consciousness, 

why are you constantly torturing me for all

my transgressions

While

Silent you remain for all the good deeds I

have performed?









© Demetrios Trifiatis
 15 November 2020

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Michael Tor November 21, 2020 at 7:36 AM A interesting thought conveyed Demetrios. Hopefully our good deeds outweigh the bad ones. Be blessed...

Caren Krutsinger November 20, 2020 at 6:27 PM I know you wrote this one tongue in cheek, yet it made me smile.

Vijay Pandit November 15, 2020 at 5:29 AM Meaningful my friend. Glad to see those beautiful flowers again. Demetrios Trifiatis November 15, 2020 at 8:30 AM Thank you so much my friend, Vijay. Hope you are healthy and strong!

Tom Cunningham November 15, 2020 at 1:29 AM Its God's way of reminding us we are going against his teachings and the good deeds that we do is a reward in itself. Tom