Be Fair

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" CONSCIOUSNESS " MY PHOTO, ©

Oh, my consciousness, why are you constantly torturing me for all my transgressions While Silent you remain for all the good deeds I have performed? © Demetrios Trifiatis 15 November 2020

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Michael Tor

Date: 11/21/2020 7:36:00 AM

A interesting thought conveyed Demetrios. Hopefully our good deeds outweigh the bad ones. Be blessed...

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/20/2020 6:27:00 PM

I know you wrote this one tongue in cheek, yet it made me smile.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/15/2020 5:29:00 AM

Meaningful my friend. Glad to see those beautiful flowers again.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/15/2020 8:30:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend, Vijay. Hope you are healthy and strong!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/15/2020 1:29:00 AM

Its God's way of reminding us we are going against his teachings and the good deeds that we do is a reward in itself. Tom