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Be Devotee

Believe it or not- God is always winner in the game of Nature Merged in oneness is eternal entity of nature Endless path that is infested with wild humans have to walk devotedly -October 28, Chattogram

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/28/2018 1:09:00 PM

Glorious writing dear, MAHTAB

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/28/2018 6:58:00 AM

"endless path that is infested with wild animals" - I laughed, because I believe you are writing about human wild animals. Very nice to include "eternal oneness of nature" - I believe this is why we love nature so, because it unifies us. We all see the same sky, and the same stars, and trees and animals, right?I l am FAVing this one,Mahtab.

Mahtab Bangalee
Date: 10/28/2018 10:17:00 PM

Thanks for your flawless and heartiest scrutinizing this poem.