Be Careful With My Heart

MY HEART WAS BROKEN
 TAKEN THEN FORSAKEN
 NUMB TILL FROST
 ENDED A WASTE
 NOW A DELICATE PIECE
 AIMLESSLY IN YOU YEARNING FOR PEACE
 MAKE IT YOUR HOLY GRAIL
 AND IT'LL NEVER FAIL

1/5/2018,,Take care
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Y. Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Anaswa Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:13 AM
THANK YOU SO MUCH
Gauthier Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 10:11 PM
Sweet poem, Felix. Congrats on your win.
Anaswa Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 6:12 AM
THANKS A LOT DEAR
Gentry Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Congratulations on your placement with this tender love poem.
Anaswa Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Thank you dear
Scars Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 2:58 PM
love, "make it your holy grail" metaphor. Great poem. Thank you for entering and congratulations on your placement...be blessed :)-luloo
Anaswa Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 6:49 AM
holy grail. .thank you dear
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