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Be Aloof I Love Loofs

Be aloof i love loofs Always apart but never a part Never a like but somehow alike Never aligned but destined to follow a line The tar stars are dripping through the night sky Words stick like jam between my teeth Phrases gravitate towards me Words fall deathly into mud graves and settle Dying in place Struggle to find that space where light and dark will never meet As i stare forward ask me what i see Not the metal or stone The seconds counting till the end The warping space that shapes the all The scurried ant that conquers tiny foes and woes I try to see everything but hide behind myself

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Date: 8/1/2018 9:59:00 AM
Ooh, I like this one too! :)) xomo
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 8/2/2018 9:09:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 8/1/2018 8:50:00 AM
Wittily done, the words are spectacular in this poem, especially the play on them.
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Christopher Quigley
Date: 8/1/2018 8:52:00 AM
Thank you

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