Michael Degenhardt Poet Etheree

Be

Be
All you
Ever want.
Allow yourself
The freedom to see
Within yourself, the you,
You always dreamed of being.
Each time you let yourself rise up
You allow yourself the chance to grow
Even against the strongest of all winds.

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Vince Suzadail Jr. September 10, 2008 at 10:42 AM More good advice. Vince

Joseph Spence Sr August 30, 2008 at 1:52 AM This is excellent. I like you philosophy on this subject. The army had this motto one of being all you can be. Great job! ~Joseph

August 25, 2008 at 1:55 PM What a positive view of life. Nice use of this challenging format for an uplifting poem. Today, I'll just enjoy being! Karen

Carrie Richards August 24, 2008 at 1:05 PM Interesting, well thought out poem! I will have to try this form sometime. Well put, and good advice. Carrie

Heidie Buys August 24, 2008 at 6:51 AM Perfect form and very wise words. Good one. Regards Heidie