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Battleinsideme Part One

I don't know what has got into me? I look in the mirror and why em I the enemy? I love God but the devil is feeding me. With contacts I got 20/20 vision,but heaven I can't see. I'm scared because my bad habits is not letting me. I'm scared because I know where I want to be. I feel like Adam and the girl is feeding me Fruit from tree. Trust me from the devil's hell, I wanna be free. I want to spread my wings-Mario Perez

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Red Fiery

Date: 10/5/2011 2:00:00 PM

With contacts I got 20/20 vision,but heaven I can't see. very sensible line Mario! We all have devil inside often forcing us to do all the nasty things. I read one drama by Christopher Marlo titles'' Dr Faustas''. Your poem reminded me of Dr Fautas

Ernie J

Date: 10/5/2011 1:05:00 PM

Self recrimination is hard to live with. Your poem makes it show the struggling you are having. And stop being so hard on yourself. No one is perfect.