Battlefield

Spindle time as sowing illusions
Drowning in a sea of images
The measures that raise life seconds
Human is the animate doll who conquered the presence

Life from the past back to the present
From the present for the future
Turnover outlined by destiny
Like an hourglass that acts as a reciprocal measure of the time

The limitations are things of beauty
When the end of a round will be on relief
As the satisfied thirst
As the favor of all the sacrifices

Life in all parts come with the name of love
A form that presents a mirage
A perfect fundamental when you touch
It was part of a mortal but drunk when you shed

Small leaps present the flowers of aesthetic
A conclusion atop of provisions that you can reaped
I will not give up in any of those circumstances
My life is still in the front line of this battlefield

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Honorable mention
Objectify me
Sponsor	Jeremy Martin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/16/2013 12:39:00 PM
YANNY, this is a nice winning poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) always~ PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/16/2013 11:47:00 PM
Thank you Linda, it's always been a pleasure to have a visit by you :D, wishing you a great day :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/15/2013 4:52:00 PM
Hey Yanny, I enjoyed your thoughtful and original piece. Congrats! -Jeremy
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Date: 3/15/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thank you Jeremy :D glad that you enjoyed :D wishing you a great day there :D. Hug, yanny
Date: 3/15/2013 4:32:00 PM
Yanny, interesting portrayal of your life, sad that you face challenges but a very creative use of the words. Congratulations!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/15/2013 6:52:00 PM
Hello Sheri, thank you for the congrats :D, wishing you a great day :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/15/2013 2:10:00 PM
This is a good write. You followed the theme well. Congrats on making the winners list !! Enjoyed the read, especially like the last two stanza's.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/15/2013 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Debra, I love them too :) , we are all still struggle with our live, aren't we? :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/15/2013 6:59:00 AM
Ya my congratulation on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/15/2013 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Connie, glad to have your visit :D hug, yanny
Date: 3/8/2013 4:16:00 PM
amazingly beautiful, and a sheer joy to read
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/8/2013 4:44:00 PM
thank you Harry, glad to see you around :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 2/25/2013 5:35:00 PM
A very beautiful poem Yanny. Thanks for sharing with us. Lucilla
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/27/2013 8:28:00 AM
Thank you Lucii, missing you here :) wishing you a lovely day there :D - hug, yanny
Date: 2/25/2013 2:19:00 PM
Hi Yanny, how are you today my Sunny friend??
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/25/2013 5:26:00 PM
Lovely as always Rick :D wishing you a lovely afternoon too :) - hug, yanny
Date: 2/21/2013 11:18:00 AM
This is extremely beautiful poem my dear friend Yanny. I'm so glad to read it tonight. I love each and every line in this poem especially the fourth part. A winning masterpiece for me! I'm so sorry if I've few time to read your work and others here but I'll promise to come back and read more because it's already late here. Good luck and best wishes always! love and hugs, Leonora
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/21/2013 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Leonora, take your time :) what is the sorry for? You already brighten up my day by your lovely words :D wishing you a wonderful day :) - hug, yanny
Date: 2/20/2013 10:37:00 PM
Yanny, I admire you for taking the challenge of this poetry contest. I found it too difficult but you were able to come up with a brilliant idea!! Good luck in the contest!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/21/2013 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, before I'm pretty not confident with this, but your words really encouraged me a lot :) thank you for making my day too :D wishing you a wonderful day Andrea - hug, yanny
Date: 2/20/2013 6:22:00 PM
very nice Yanny, it should do well. Have a great day!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 2/21/2013 8:05:00 AM
I made few changes especially in hourglass verse, pretty not confident with it before, but now finally I'm going with that new verse, hopefully it still fit the content :), have a great day too :) - hug, yanny
Date: 2/20/2013 2:47:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by to congrats me on a win..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Sara, happy to see you around and a pleasure to read yours too :)
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