Battlefield

Prickly blades of grass,
Unlike their bent ancestors:
Praise the golden sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 3, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Good use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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June 3, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Raul. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2010 at 2:56 AM
congratulations raul! i really love your haikus, great job
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May 31, 2010 at 8:42 PM
Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett
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May 31, 2010 at 10:01 AM
Congrats Raul on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go .. good luck.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 31, 2010 at 8:19 AM
A worthy Ist round winner Raul.Rgds Brian.
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April 13, 2010 at 6:50 PM
Congrats Raul on your haiku being featured. Vince
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April 12, 2010 at 12:27 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Raul. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Congrats Raul on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent write to feature and share for us to enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie
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February 5, 2010 at 9:27 PM
Very clever!
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February 5, 2010 at 9:14 AM
Wonderful Haiku Raul, nice idea behind this one >> James
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February 4, 2010 at 8:39 PM
very nice Raul. I love the way you vew the world in an artistic way.
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February 3, 2010 at 4:50 PM
raul ..a haiku master in my eyes :) ..i have learned alot ever since i've met you on gs ...when i read your works ..i was impressed by your art of creating images with just a few words and i am really looking up to you .. thank you for sharing these haiku's with me and the rest on ps . Marco
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February 3, 2010 at 2:39 AM
I like the scene
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February 2, 2010 at 11:48 PM
Wow! powerful words. I often have trouble with Haiku because I have not learned how to say what I am trying to say in such few words. You are truly talented at Haiku. Have a great day! Scarlett
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