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Battlefield

Prickly blades of grass, Unlike their bent ancestors: Praise the golden sun.

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Date: 6/3/2010 12:20:00 PM

Good use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Raul. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Keabetswe Molotsi

Date: 6/2/2010 2:56:00 AM

congratulations raul! i really love your haikus, great job

Date: 5/31/2010 8:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett

Rick Parise

Date: 5/31/2010 12:24:00 PM

Congrats on the first round !~Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2010 10:01:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go .. good luck.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Brian Strand

Date: 5/31/2010 8:19:00 AM

A worthy Ist round winner Raul.Rgds Brian.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/13/2010 6:50:00 PM

Congrats Raul on your haiku being featured. Vince

Janette Fisher

Date: 4/12/2010 12:27:00 PM

Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2010 11:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Raul. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2010 5:34:00 AM

Congrats Raul on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent write to feature and share for us to enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie

David Byrne

Date: 2/5/2010 9:27:00 PM

Very clever!

James Fraser

Date: 2/5/2010 9:14:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Raul, nice idea behind this one >> James

Abe Lopez

Date: 2/4/2010 8:39:00 PM

very nice Raul. I love the way you vew the world in an artistic way.

Marcus Crane

Date: 2/3/2010 4:50:00 PM

raul ..a haiku master in my eyes :) ..i have learned alot ever since i've met you on gs ...when i read your works ..i was impressed by your art of creating images with just a few words and i am really looking up to you .. thank you for sharing these haiku's with me and the rest on ps . Marco

Susan Palli

Date: 2/3/2010 2:39:00 AM

I like the scene

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 2/2/2010 11:48:00 PM

Wow! powerful words. I often have trouble with Haiku because I have not learned how to say what I am trying to say in such few words. You are truly talented at Haiku. Have a great day! Scarlett