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Battlefield

Prickly blades of grass, Unlike their bent ancestors: Praise the golden sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/3/2010 12:20:00 PM
Good use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Raul. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:56:00 AM
congratulations raul! i really love your haikus, great job
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Date: 5/31/2010 8:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your first round win. Best wishes. Scarlett
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Date: 5/31/2010 12:24:00 PM
Congrats on the first round !~Rick
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Date: 5/31/2010 10:01:00 AM
Congrats Raul on your poem making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go .. good luck.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/31/2010 8:19:00 AM
A worthy Ist round winner Raul.Rgds Brian.
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Date: 4/13/2010 6:50:00 PM
Congrats Raul on your haiku being featured. Vince
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:27:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Raul. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congrats Raul on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. an excellent write to feature and share for us to enjoy...luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 2/5/2010 9:27:00 PM
Very clever!
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Date: 2/5/2010 9:14:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku Raul, nice idea behind this one >> James
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:39:00 PM
very nice Raul. I love the way you vew the world in an artistic way.
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Date: 2/3/2010 4:50:00 PM
raul ..a haiku master in my eyes :) ..i have learned alot ever since i've met you on gs ...when i read your works ..i was impressed by your art of creating images with just a few words and i am really looking up to you .. thank you for sharing these haiku's with me and the rest on ps . Marco
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Date: 2/3/2010 2:39:00 AM
I like the scene
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:48:00 PM
Wow! powerful words. I often have trouble with Haiku because I have not learned how to say what I am trying to say in such few words. You are truly talented at Haiku. Have a great day! Scarlett
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